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Kia ora, Kylah! Well done on your first post! Your chromepet looks good. I especially like your tail. Next time, could you try adding some texture to some of your shapes?
Kia ora. My name is Leace and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti I really liked your chrome pet.This reminds me of making oneNext time you could add same more shapes Ka rawe. Leace J.
Kia ora Kylah. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love the great detail you added to your chromepet, but maybe to step up the mahi you could add more writing to your description. May I ask what is the animal you made from your chromepet?
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Kia ora, Kylah! Well done on your first post! Your chromepet looks good. I especially like your tail. Next time, could you try adding some texture to some of your shapes?
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Leace and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti
ReplyDeleteI really liked your chrome pet.This reminds me of making oneNext time you could add same more shapes Ka rawe. Leace J.
Kia ora Kylah. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love the great detail you added to your chromepet, but maybe to step up the mahi you could add more writing to your description. May I ask what is the animal you made from your chromepet?
ReplyDeletethanks teylah for you feedback
ReplyDeletehi leace I love how you told me all the things i need did to no well done
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